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The next morning, Eddy was parked out front, driving a different car—a black Cadi composed of
more rust than metal. I stepped off of the steps from my place and crossed my arms over my chest, glaring down the drive at him.
He looked up and grinned.
“What’s going on?” I asked, walking to his window, which he pumped down with a squeal from the glass.
“Thought you might like a ride.”
“Yeah? Really?”
His tan deepened. “You always ride with Manuel. I thought I’d offer.”
It took a whole lot of effort to keep from grinning. I shouldn’t encourage him, but I had to admit there was some kind of charm with him sitting there, looking up at me all expectantly.
“So, you wanna ride to work?”
Sighing, I didn’t respond, just went around and dropped into the deep seat next to him. He pulled out a paper bag stained with grease, handing it to me. “I stopped at the bakery.”
Opening the bag let out a delicious scent that had me salivating. He’d obviously hit the Panaderia, and the warm breads coated with sugar were nearly gone by the time we pulled in at the garage.
“Damn girl, did you leave me anything?” Eddy laughed, pulling the bag away from me.
“Wait, that wasn’t my share?” I asked, feigning innocence.
He rolled his eyes and pulled out a giant pan-dulce, covered with a thick coating of white sugar in a shell pattern. “Thanks for not eating it all.”
“I wouldn’t do that,” I laughed, settling back in my seat. We were actually early. Manuel wasn’t there yet, and Andy hadn’t unlocked the main doors.
“I wasn’t so sure,” Eddy shook his head, wiping crumbs from his lips.
We sat in silence for a minute, me starting out of the car, not able to see anything. Emily’s words from yesterday about the shadows were creeping back into my mind, slowly circling like a giant shark about to attack. I needed to find out more, but didn’t know where to start.
I flinched when Eddy reached over, his fingertips brushing against mine on the seat. Glancing at him, I forced a small smile, struggling to keep my hand in place and not pull it away like Eddy was a leper.
Eddy’s fingers were warm when they slipped between mine. If I’d thought about it days ago, I would have been repulsed by the idea of allowing myself to do something like this. I had to keep my distance. It was for his safety.
Now it just felt good. Felt safe. Felt, well, just felt. Like something for once wasn’t bad, or stressful, or all confusing.
The knock on my window made me flinch, and Eddy’s fingers gripped mine more tightly. Outside the glass, Adam grinned at us.
I swallowed hard, knowing I was going to hear about this later. Adam held up his keys and jerked his thumb at the shop.
“Looks like work’s started,” Eddy muttered, clearly not relishing the interruption.
I hurried into the front office, busying myself with messages on the machine, updating our schedule, and placing some orders left over from last week.
And, just for fun, another little outtake, which explains why I often refer to this novel as X-Files meets Buffy:
“You know what they’ve always kind of reminded me of?” I asked. The guys shook their heads. “Ever watch the X-Files? You know the creepy alien virus slime things that attack people?”
Manuel chuckled, nodding. Adam gave me a one-eyebrow look like I’d lost my mind.
“They always made me think of a bigger version of those things. Gross, and almost like they’d be slimy, but still like a big shadow,” I continued.
“That does seem kind of right, I mean, at least how they look,” Adam conceded. “Thanks for ruining that show for me.”
“You’re totally welcome, Mulder,” I smirked.
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If you're a writer, have you ever had to cut a character? As a reader, what do you think when you hear about characters that get cut out?
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love the excerpt, Meradeth! and happy birthday to Evernight!
ReplyDeleteI've had to not only cut characters, I've cut whole plot lines.
ReplyDeleteAs a reader I do love to hear about characters and scenes that had to be cut. I usually wish they were in the book, but most of the time I understand why the author had to cut them. I really enjoyed the scene with Eddy and I am glad you have him in a file to hopefully use another time! :)
ReplyDeleteI have cut scenes and characters. I have cut whole chapters. Cutting them out can hurt at first, but so far it has been for the best (but, like you- I have kept some in a file to hopefully use when the time is right). :)
Cut scenes are probably best if the Author removed them. Maybe it just didn't fit at that time in the story and it will be used in the next story.. Happy Birthday! grandmatinaof2(at)gmail.com
ReplyDeleteA birthday bash and you got to share a missing excerpt with us!
ReplyDeleteLoved your line, "composed of more rust than metal." Great image.
ReplyDeleteGood job on that outtake. I can only imagine how painful it was to remove a WHOLE character from a book. LOL I don't think I've had to do that just yet. I would downplay some roles and increase others in terms of their relevance and spotlight.
ReplyDeleteHappy birthday to Evernight!
I had to cut characters in my zombie book because I just had too many to start with. A couple ended up combined.
ReplyDeleteAs a reader I'm always curious about cut characters! It's so weird!
I like your outtake, Meradeth!
ReplyDeleteAs a writer, I've had to toss entire stories and begin again (though I've not written in a while). As a reader, I understand sometimes characters just don't work. They may reappear in another scene in another tale, though. michelle_willms at yahoo dot com
ReplyDeleteI've cut characters, sure. As a reader, and especially if the story was gripping. I would be very curious to find out about them.
ReplyDeleteI do wonder about why they were written in the first place & why they needed to be cut.
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I want to eat one of those pan things! They sound delicious. =) It's sad Eddy was cut- I liked him already just from that little bit. Any guy that brings a girl baked goods is alright in my book, lol!
ReplyDeletedoesn't bother me as a reader
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It usually doesn't bother me as a reader.
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As a reader, the few times that I've heard of a character being cut, it usually meant that they were subsumed into one of the characters that were kept or they don't move the story/characters forward. In that case, cut away.
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Good excerpts! Sure, as a writer I have cut (or merged) characters. When this occurs it is almost always because I find that in a rough draft I have two people who represent two similar stances or themes, thus they become redundant. Or I may simply have too many players in one novel. I never regret it, and if the character ending up on the "cutting room floor" is a good one, he or she can turn up in another novel!
ReplyDeleteI remember this story from way back when! I remember the auto shop hottie too. :-) I've definitely cut my share of characters, so I know what that's about. Congrats!
ReplyDeleteHi Meradeth!
ReplyDeleteI love the excerpt! And happy birthday to Evernight!
Lovely excerpt, and Happy Birthday Evernight!
ReplyDeleteI have had to cut characters. It hurts. I like Donald Maass's advice though to combine them with another character and thus complicate their role.
I would want to know if a character has been cut if it's important to the story. Thanks for participating in the hop! saraannn912@gmail.com
ReplyDeleteAs a reader, I love hearing about cut characters and scenes! I love the behind the scenes perspective! prettylittlepages[at]gmail[dot]com
ReplyDeleteI don't recall learning about characters being cut. I have been stunned when major secondary characters have gotten killed off though. Charlaine Harris is famous (to me) for that. acm05atjuno.com
ReplyDeleteAs a reader, when I hear about characters that get cut out I think that the cut characters were too similar to main characters.
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I'm always curious when I hear about a cut.
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If the character doesn't fit or adds nothing to the story then they should be cut.
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Sometimes I wonder how the story would have been if the character hadn't been cut.
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ReplyDeleteI love the sneak peak! Its not quite enough tho. lol :) Thanks for sharing it! As a reading, i love reading deleted scenes and more times than not, i hate that its not in the book. lol Thanks for sharing!
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When I hear about characters that get cut out of book I assume it is because they have too many character to follow already or that the character isn't fitting into the story correctly.
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