- The word "had" is all over the place. So help me, I've deleted at least 300 of them.
- The words "happen" and "Island" are also serious offenders (the latter has to do with my story, fyi).
- Head-popping is thankfully only something I did once or twice. Honestly, how I even managed it once, while writing in first person, kind of makes me scratch my head.
- I really hate copyright. You know all the times you use a trademarked name or item, you may have to pay for it? Well, last night I had the fun time of removing my references to Wal-Mart and Cherry Garcia. I was kind of sad. But hopefully I can still use the quote at the start of my story--I've had to make a special request from Penguin. *fingers crossed!*
- I kind of like this book :) After the millions of rounds of revisions and other crap I've gone through with this story, there's a part of me that still loves it. I just hope other people do to!
And, to top off today, I totally scored at the library book sale (Anna and the French Kiss, Intertwined, The Dead-Tossed Waves, How to Ditch Your Fairy, Changeless, The Graveyard Book, just to name a few--all brand new and only $1! I may be giving a few of these away soon, as I swear my shelves are going to collapse on me!)
Have an awesome weekend!