Ah, Tuesday. It's raining like crazy here and feels like the middle of (a California) winter. I keep thinking "hey, it's spring!" only to be fooled again :)
Okay, here's where I'm hanging out today, and definitely stop by because there's all kinds of giveaways going on and other fun: Little Library Muse has a little interview running, and Jeanz Book Read n Review has all sorts of fun things going on, like a review, promo, and a little tidbit from each of the characters in Chemistry.
And now, on to some first kisses:
Entry #9
~When he finished talking, I took a long sip of his Coke and
dropped my head on my hands. “Fine. If you expect me to believe all that, tell
me one thing: what happened with Steven the other night?”
It was the one question I hadn’t added to the list. My
ace-in-the-hole. Because he knew there was no explanation for that.
“What kind of answer are you looking for?” He leaned across
the table, his face inches from mine.
All the air felt like it was sucked from the room. I wanted
so badly to close that distance and find out if he kissed as well as I
imagined. But I didn’t dare. I could hardly move.
“Because, it seems to me that you have some pretty
interesting assumptions about me already. So, what are you looking for? That
I’m Superman, ready to put on a cape?” His sarcasm could have melted plastic.
“No. Just the truth. I know you’re not a super hero. But
whatever happened the other night was strange. You at least should explain it.
Getting defensive just makes me think you’re hiding something.”
He laughed and looked away, finally letting me draw a breath.
“Fine. Look, the bat was already mostly broken. Steven wouldn’t ruin a
perfectly good one if he even had the guts to beat me up. I barely touched it
and it broke. I think it just scared him.”
I didn’t buy it, but I couldn’t find any way to argue with
him. Not that I’d thought he was anything “super” human, but there was
something different about him. And if he wasn’t going to tell me, well, I’d figure
it out on my own.
James took control of the conversation. It was another of
his gifts. He asked the right kinds of questions to get me talking. It wasn’t
long before we were walking along the path next to the creek on the edge of
town, discussing everything from my parents to where I was going for college.
It was impossible to miss the fact we were alone. Having his
undivided attention no longer left me feeling wiggly. Instead it was like
holding a live coal in my chest—it burned so hot I almost couldn’t feel the
cold.
We paused by one of the park benches, his arm brushing
against mine. Every millimeter of the contact sparked against my skin through
my coat. His hand took mine and I shivered at the feel of his rough palms.
“If I kiss you, promise me you won’t slap me?” he asked, not
quite succeeding at keeping the laughter out of his voice.
“Depends on the kiss.” I looked up at him and was grateful
for the darkness so he couldn’t see my blush.
“I’m always up for a challenge,” he said, sliding his arms
around my waist and lifting me carefully so that our lips met.
It was definitely a kiss I couldn’t forget if I tried.
Ahh, the kiss we've all been waiting for :-)
ReplyDeleteI'm pretty sure we just managed to simultaneously post on each other's blogs :)
DeleteExcellent scene! I love kiss scenes. I barely wrote my first one a few months back. It was good to finally get past that point and quit being shy. :)
ReplyDeleteI definitely agree :) Lots of fun!
DeleteAh yes, the kiss. More romantic and titillating than an explicit bedroom scene, because we all kinda hold our breaths, waiting for it to happen.
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely!! :)
DeleteFirst kiss scenes between characters are always so thrilling if they've been foreshadowed and put off for long enough. Ahhhh....
ReplyDeleteI love first kisses, I must admit! :)
DeleteCongrats on the new book, Meradeth and MUCH SUCCESS :)
ReplyDelete(I get to - I think - write about first kisses when I begin WIP#2 in July.
It sounds like it should be fun (judging from the comments above :)
Thank you! And I definitely do think it's a fun writing topic :)
DeleteDepends on the kiss, huh?
ReplyDeleteSpring is nothing more than a rumor, a lie, a fabrication, or pure slander, depending on your point of view. It's decided to skip away this year.
lol, it seems that we've taken a dive into summer here now. Not complaining though--it's heaven!
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