Also, I'll be attempting to hang out online (any help spreading the word on these posts would be much appreciated!): I have a post at Blood, Sweat, and Books today :)
And now back to the short story. Parts I & II.
Entry #3
~At first I thought I escaped the attention of the very
“wacko” (Mary’s word) James, but I had a few additional classes with Richie I
hadn’t noticed before. In my defense, Richie could have been an extra chair in
the back for all the attention he drew. He didn’t run with the rest of us, but
we did share English and Photography. And that meant James shared the classes
with us.
James found seats next to me in both. In English, he made
Drew move; just stood over his desk, gave Drew this look that spoke something
in guy-speak, and Drew grabbed his stuff and retreated to another seat.
“I meant to ask your name, before,” James said, leaning
across the aisle. I could smell him—some kind of soap and male smell that
reminded me a bit of the scent-stuff Dad used when he went hunting, only
pleasant.
“And you’re asking now?” I didn’t look up from the book I pretended
to read.
“Yes. My name in James Henniker, though apparently most of
the school knows that already.”
“Word travels fast. Especially with new students.”
“That doesn’t answer my question.”
“And why do you want to know my name?” I finally looked up. I
instantly regretted it. He was too close, staring at me with a look that
brought back the wiggly feeling.
“So I can talk to you. I imagine it would be better if I
knew your name if I ever tried calling you.”
I burst out laughing, shaking my head. “I don’t know what
they normally do in Germany, but around here, if you’re thinking I’m going to
give you my phone number, you’re out of luck.”
He drew his brows together and narrowed his eyes just enough
to make me swallow hard. “What is it that people normally do around here?”
I had no idea how to deal with his directness. Mary would
know exactly what to do, but I hadn’t had any real practice. Now this guy wanted
my number? After barely saying ten words to me?
“I don’t know,” I admitted. Thankfully the class was called
to attention and I had the excuse to turn my gaze to the front of the room. I
spent the next hour attempting to pay attention while my mind spun.
Thankfully, he didn’t seem to notice the ten times I glanced
at him, trying to make sense of what made me want to reach over and scrawl my
digits across his notes.
Wow. You do a super job nailing the way young people talk and act.
ReplyDeleteThanks Susan :)
DeleteSo dead on, Meradeth! Guys usually say 10 words then ask for your number.
ReplyDeleteEnjoy Yellowstone :-)
Hehe, this is true :)
DeleteAll right.... who among my half of the species blabbed?
DeleteGood passage, Meradeth!
LOL!!
DeleteLove these entries. I wish I could read your books in print!
ReplyDeleteMe too! Soon, hopefully :)
DeleteAwesome! Loved the entries. :)
ReplyDeleteAlso- I have only been to Yellowstone twice- but it is one of my favorite places! It is so beautiful and there is so much to see. I hope you have a fabulous visit!
Thank you!! It was an awesome visit and I really enjoyed myself :) Picture to come!
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