Now, the real question: what do I do with this short story? Just leave it here on my blog? Bundle it up and put it on Amazon? Ideas warmly welcome!
Entry #14
~I pretended to be sick for the next couple of days. My parents
didn’t think much of it and left me alone. Missing school at this point was a
joke—the school year was a week away from being over and then I’d graduate.
Tuesday, I woke early and went to my post at the window,
peering out into the golden dawn light. And I saw him. The creepy man from the
Dairy Queen, sitting on the curb across the street, watching my house.
I was pissed. I got ready faster than I’d managed in twelve
years of school, and walked outside to face him. He hadn’t moved since I
checked five minutes before, and I approached him with fire burning through me.
“What the hell do you think you’re doing here?” I demanded,
stopping a pace in front of him, hands on hips, looking forward to this battle
more than I could admit.
“Waiting to see you.”
“Well, I’m here now. What do you want?” I snapped.
“I want to know how well you know James.”
Everything James had warned me about flashed through my
mind. I had to play this very carefully. “He’s my boyfriend and a senior at
school. I think that’s all that matters to you.”
The man uncurled from his hunched over seat and stood, a
good foot taller than me. The random desire to chuck my hairbrush at him
flitted through my thoughts.
“And if you knew what he really is, would that make a
difference?”
“I know he’s a good man. He’s kind, honest, and treats me
better than I could ever hope for. That’s what he really is. And you know,
what? I love him. For all that he is.” I hadn’t voiced the words before and I
still kick myself for saying them to the stranger and not James first.
“He’s never mentioned anything else?” The man leaned
forward, like he was going to smell me.
I held my ground. “I don’t know what you’re talking about,
but maybe you’re missing my meaning. I know James Henniker. I know him. And even if there are things
about him I haven’t learned yet, I know he’s exactly what I want.”
With that, I spun and went to the tank. I drove too fast the
whole way to school and squealed the tires pulling into my parking spot. James waited
for me, doing his best to not be amused at my arrival.
I stalked up to him, put both hands on his shoulders, and
pulled him down for a good long kiss.
We finally broke apart when several people started clapping
and cheering. I didn’t let go, keeping him close so he could hear me whisper,
“I don’t care. I love you. Everything
else is just a bonus. And if you want to stay, I know I’ll never want anyone
else.”
James still denies it, but I know he was nearly in tears.
After graduation, James came to my house. My parents were
still worried about how serious things had gotten, so ‘all of a sudden.’ If
they only knew.
James had asked to be released. He’s told me since that he
was so grateful to be allowed to do so on his own terms. The last thing he
wanted was to be forced from the Sary.
I’ve heard a hundred other stories by now. So many things
he’s seen and done, the pain and hope of far more years than I can imagine.
Part of me feels guilty he’s giving it all up. That for me he would chose to
become human—to die again.
He says that it’s more like he’s been waiting for this
chance forever. That by becoming mortal, he’s gaining more than he ever thought
possible.
There’s just one favor he’s asked me to do for him: set up
my camera in the backyard. Once the house is empty—my parents left for the
lake—I set things up in a secluded corner near an old dead tree my father is
always promising to have removed.
James asks for some privacy. He hasn’t shown me his wings
since the first time. I didn’t press. If he wanted to show me them, he would.
But I get the feeling it’s just too painful.
When I ask him later about the photo, he shakes his head and
smiles. “It’s a secret. I know I’ll probably have to burn it someday, but I
don’t want to completely forget what I once was.”
Sounds a great story. Definitely bundle it up and offer through Amazon.
ReplyDeleteAll the best.
Thanks, Nas!!
DeleteI have often thought that bundling shorts into a book would be a neat idea. In my case it would be a lot of non-fiction local history, but still, I think people like shorts like that.
ReplyDeleteIt is something you could read at lunch hour, waiting in the doctor's office, on a bus/train commute. When you feel like reading but don't feel like getting engrossed in an entire novel.
I also think they're great for people who have difficulty with reading or staying focused for a whole novel. That goes for people of all ages. Literacy is an issue in many communities. As a parent I've found collections of shorts by the same author a helpful tool with a son who had reading issues as a child and not an avid reader as a teen. It had to be REALLY good to get his interest. So if I found an author in a certain genre I thought he would like I could hand him the book and say, "just read the first one. That's all I ask. If you don't like it OK. But if you do, try the next one."
Sometimes I'd get it right, sometimes not, but he always read at least the first one. He was reading, and that's the point. I wish more authors would do collections of shorts. Of course now he just reads auto building mags or books, but that's alright too. He developed the skill and that was the important thing.
I had to laugh when I read your first paragraph to #14. That is so both my teens right now. It's their last week of high school (praise The Lord, I am saved from further torture) and they both have senioritis. :)
You make a great point here! I totally just emailed my editor about this now :) Thank you!!
DeleteGood! Personally, I think it might be a great marketing angle to promote literacy with shorts.
ReplyDeleteYes, there are chapter books out there that are used for those with reading disabilities but it is still all one story to try and remember to the end of the entire book.
But with different short stories together in the same book by the same author gives those with reading problems or ADHD type disabilities the opportunity to enjoy the same authors everyone else may be talking about in novel form.
Let me know when you release it. :)
Thanks so much! I totally know what you mean with helping people enjoy reading who don't particularly like longer works, or aren't to that level yet. I worked with a program for adults who needed a literacy boost, and trying to find non-kid stories that were short and simple for them was nearly impossible!
DeleteSeriously appreciate your feedback :)
I just thought, imagine it. It would take away some of the stigma for those who are embarrassed about having a reading problem to be able to say, "Oh I know that author. I've read SEVERAL of their short stories." It is a very positive thing to be able to say.
ReplyDeleteThe marketing possibilities are endless... sorry, got off on the idea train there... carry on. :)
I love that!! I think that would be totally amazing :)
DeleteWhat a great snippet here!
ReplyDeleteI like the idea of putting it all together, making a cover, and giving it for free. Please download freebies all the time and if they like what they read, they're more inclined to buy your other books. Or at least I would hope so!
I think I've heard something like that before and it makes total sense to me! I'm definitely going to give it a shot :)
DeleteYes, you should put this up on Amazon.
ReplyDeleteThanks! I'm working on it now :)
DeleteSounds awesome ;) Thank you for sharing. <3
ReplyDeleteThank you for commenting on my mailbox last week. <3
Love, Carina @ Carina's Books
Thanks for stopping by here! :)
DeleteExcellent wrap up, Meradeth!
ReplyDeleteThanks!!
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