Okay, here's a bit from the opening (which hasn't been edited to within an inch of its life yet). This one starts off a bit on the crazy side:
I knew the day was not going to
end well as soon as I saw the gun. It bulged in the outside pocket of his
backpack, unseen unless someone was looking for it. And of course I had to be
the one looking for it.
Chad kept his head down in
class, his pen scratching dark lines of some doodle across his paper. I couldn’t
drag my eyes away from him.
He brought a gun. Damn it. He was going to follow through
with this.
I was so focused on the knot of
guilt in my stomach and tangle of plans to stop Chad that Bea kicked my chair
to alert me class started. Of course Bea had to be in this class with the crazy
kid I was supposed to be helping.
I did a quick head-count. It was
Friday, last period, and next week was Spring Break. Most everyone had ditched
already. There were thirteen students, including me and Chad, and our teacher.
Just enough of the students were
on Chad’s list.
Don't do it Chad!!
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Eeep, I know!!!
DeleteLove the title you settled on. And what a start! Can't wait to read more. :)
ReplyDeleteAny time you want to read more, just let me know! :)
DeleteThe title you decided on is awesome! Yeah!
ReplyDeleteI am hoping Chad doesn't follow through with his plan. Yikes! I am on the edge of my seat now!
I was about to say I'm totally excited, but that just sounds kind of wrong :) I'm glad you're on the edge of your seat!
DeleteYikes! great tease! I especially like that first line.
ReplyDeleteThanks! I kind of love first lines--spend waaaay too much time on them :)
DeleteWow, that's how ya grab your readers by the neck! great start! And yes, I DO like that title.
ReplyDeleteThis book is AWESOME, as I find all Meradeth Houston books!!!! <3
ReplyDeleteThanks, Erin!! :)
DeleteTruth! :)
DeleteOh Mer! That is intense. And the title is great!
ReplyDeleteI call it the teachers-worst-nightmare-opening... I'm glad you like the title :)
DeleteSounds great! Very intense. I also like Chad as a name.
ReplyDeleteThanks!! :)
DeleteYikes! Sounds intense indeed!
ReplyDeletelol, yeah, definitely :)
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